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Light Of The Moon

What you seek to be, in the end
is in a place you've already been
You find the dark side mysterious
in it is your disguise for the curious.

Passion for artistic endeavor
out weighs fools trying to be clever
you create from the depths of your heart
You covet the child in dreams not apart.

Your channels of inspirations doors
are in the hallway of psychic metaphors
the energy for your art so it may seem
your hearts visions on the threshold of a dream.

To live in simplicity of just being you
adrift in the confidence of what you do
you know what you want your in tune
All you want is in light of the moon.

 

 

 

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  • piccola silver member
    April 21, 2008

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    "on the threshold of a dream" what a beautiful phrase. It's so romantic and truly poetic! thank you for entering.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 4, 2008

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    This feels to me as if the beat of a song would go well with this, it has a certain bounce to it as you read which I don't find in a lot of poetry anymore, wonderful that this scored a bronze, you really have got that pen dipped in gold and I am smiling at all the new delights for me to read

    Karen


  • PastelMoons gold member
    December 24, 2007
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    Thank you for entering
    I adore this!
    ~Pastel


  • dustookie2
    December 20, 2007

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    I have to admit i like the way this poem sounds as it comes off my lips has a nice feel one that is best read aloud ...open mic performance. Magic can happen under the light of the lunar cycle Nice imagery supported by wisdom of life Good luck in the contest.