Vodka's gate --> Hate's castle
Erased time on miseries face
Withering hope denied by light
Nights translucent path
Hiding wrath within doom
Castle's gate <-- Vodka's hate
Encase haunts giving chase
Encircling chaos' skeleton skien
Flaunting horrors' besmirched kiss
Caresses offered nightmare's dream
Hate's gate <--> Vodka's castle
Entangled minds litter graves
Bitter hearts revive Samhain
Buried hurts entombed by wish
Embalmed more's liquid silence
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
Wow that is very unique, I liek that alot.
-
this is very interesting... i like the comparisons and the what look like arrows in the first line of each stanza... very original and creative... great write and good luck..
-
This is morbidly beautiful and what and exquisite struction, much kudos and good luck in the contest
Adding your comment:
