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hornswags and greebles

Beware all little greebles as darkness draws nigh
For the hornswags are watching way up in the sky
when you fall asleep you're dreams they will find
and come of the morning they'l take of your mind.

Oft in the past when the moonlight was pale
hornswags would taunt us and fear would prevail
now take of you're medicine like good greebles do
for nesstleberry juice is what makes you get through.

One day in the future perhaps maybe soon
a saviour will find us and for one dubloon
he'll take out the hornswags and merry we'll be
and sleep once more safely without nesstle berry.

Author notes

This is the song sung to all small greebles before the great hornswaggle fight of 1502bm.(SORRY OPTION#4)
this is only part of my little fantasy world xx

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  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    April 15, 2008
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    good!very creative!


  • tarcus
    December 28, 2007
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    rock-a-by baby


  • opaqueangel
    December 27, 2007
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    What option is this? Put in authors notes 24hr notice!


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    Hey, hey, it does fit pretty with "Rock-a-Bye Baby!
    Oh, now I'm sleepy...haha...
    I think this poem is very nice...haha...thanks for entering and good luck!

    Best Wishes,
    ~Mairéad~