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Velvet tears and purple stains

Velvet tears and purple stains

Is all of you, that remains

Your tender kiss, still moist with lust

Feels like heaven, upon my bust

 

Velvet tears and purple stains

Sealing love, within my veins

Your tender kiss, disguised with trust

Heated moments, very robust

 

Velvet tears and purple stains

You sit and watch the juice that drains

Your tender kiss, it makes me want

Your head within my dripping font

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  • Trixie08
    January 16, 2008

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    This is very sensual and an example of what I was looking for. I love how it's subtle but you still get the idea. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • penman gold member
    December 28, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. So sensual and creative. Best of luck in the contest.


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 20, 2007

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    romance touches within the heart where memories are made and remembered!

    Yes I'm smiling as I read this!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • Amera gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    OMG! You are soooooo bad! The image you paint with this verse commands that I now go take a cold shower.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    December 20, 2007

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    Drink and be merry,,,oh wait, thats beer isn't it...or is it...


    damn mind blowing yet again...

    your knack hasn't left you Thank the lord...


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 19, 2007
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    Oh this is so hot.
    Yummy
    You rock!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    Very sensual and seductive...wow!
    Well done!
    Bravo and kudos to you!
    All the best to you in this contest!

  • Justin3
    December 19, 2007
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    Very sensual and also very celestial diction makes this poem a true gem.Well done!


  • Blueskywonder
    December 19, 2007

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    Oooooh... that is a perfect ending to this deeply sensual piece of poetry beautifully expressed!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    o0o0o its deff erotic and just wow lol. i love it the repitition has an awsome effect. well done and best of luck

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