Her room
a big stuffed caterpillar/snake/thingimibob?
underblanket warms bodies
I cheated!
fell asleep
Author notes
this cannot be judged fairly... lololol, as I cheated with knowing where to find a warm place for my bum/body/legs/cold feet........
A contest entry
- sick to death of winter scenery by Suzanne Dia.
450 points, ended December 19, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I had such an image of being a little girl, wrapped in my blanket as though it were a cocoon.
loved this.
- Kimmie
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lol... having known the cold from living on the streets i can understand this one. the thought of you cuddled up to the caterpillar was really funny. this was a good read but i wonder what people would say about 'real' cheating...and am i or not?
hugs,
georgie,
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"thingimibob"....
Can't tell you where that took my mind!!! Warm, fuzzy feel to this one - lovely!
~ Nicolette
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thingimebob is a grand word
i want to find a use for the word caffuffle
elaine
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Now that's a new word to add to memory...lol
Thingimibob...
Cool I like this feels all fuzzy
Becky
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lol...very cute..I don't think I've ever read the word
'thingimibob' in a poem before
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hehe, I don't have it anymore ..I imagine the girls have absconded with it, but this is a fun reminder
thank you!!
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Yepp
warms me to think of it too....
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