sipping a glass of ruby port
she waits for the taxi;
she will dance the night away:
be sweaty
so hot ...
Author notes
getting ready for the staff party
am in the mood to party
and dance me socks off!
A contest entry
- sick to death of winter scenery by Suzanne Dia.
450 points, ended December 19, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well, I wish we could trade places then! I would love to go and dance me knickers off, is what I would love to do.
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winter weather does that to me also ... winter I hate ... but it doesn't have to be anywhere near me, ever .... i like this one!!!! ... Moqui
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love the imagery! love the ruby port...
and, of course the final line!
very clever!
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thank you so much
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This one made me smile, Elaine. Port is just the right thing for a cold winter's night
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~ Nicolette
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What a mood setting piece
I like this and don't drink to much
but if you do make a complete ass out of yourself cause people are gonna talk about it anyway
Becky
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LOL...mine's tonight...this little poem gets me in the mood..thank you, I needed to read this, as it's a blizzard out and I don't feel like leaving the house!!
hope it was fun
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it was!
i waq good tho' - have top work tomorrow so only one bottle of red!
hope yours was fun too
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You go girl!!! Dance for me too!
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Oh, see, I need a GOOD holiday party to get me out of this mood. hehe - have fun, and drink LOTS of water
thank you ..
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i got told not to leave early cos i was the entertainment
is that a good thing?
will ihave a job in the morning
i was good girl - honest
elaine
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excellent... our bash is tomorrow... woot woot
have a grand night out luv....
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be good
and if you can't be good be careful
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