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Steeled deliverance
drug across
impediments,
blizzard deterrance
erases the glory
of its toil.

Author notes

prompt - sleigh

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  • Mirthryl
    December 20, 2007

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    Very nicely done. Excellent descriptions. Love the "steeled deliverance" and "erase[ed]...glory of its toil". Congrats on the silver!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    December 20, 2007
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    great image!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    Excellent take on the prompt, my friend!
    Very well done!
    Wishing you the very best in this contest!


  • Desire gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Oh My Apple Pie~~
    Wonderful piece You have penned Sweetness
    Great take on the prompt~~

    especially the steeled deliverance...
    Love that
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    and voice!
    Many blessings to You in the contest
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~