angel of mercy arrived today
washing winter blues away -pouring herself over my brittle
white washed bones
~ rearranging my soul ~
Author notes
For Suzi
In a list
A contest entry
- sick to death of winter scenery by Suzanne Dia.
450 points, ended December 19, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critique Please
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beauty
is what i read here
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hope she comes for me.
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This could have fit my contest well... It's like a bonus poem i guess. Thanks for the warmth!
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Thank you sweetie.
Hope you are staying warm
Becky
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warming!
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beautiful... i see why this placed...
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Thank you miss M
Are you shopping for coconuts or just milking some?
Becky
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only in my dreams.. I am actually just coughing and slowly dying...
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Drink more Robatussin
It will at least induce good writing
Seriously...
Alka-selser Plus works like a charm and if you get night time formula it will help you sleep and not pee your pants...
Becky
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Pretty
This one is pretty. We could all use that kind of angel now. Very nice.
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aww..doesn't warmth do this?? I love this...I love warmth..this is beautiful, Becky..
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ohh, i like this
i wanna buy some wings
wear them til it's warm again
really beautiful, becky. Thank you for entering.
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