Thump
Thump
Pound
Thump
Thump
Pound
The beating of my heart
Speeds up ten fold
As desire sparks inside me
Causing my blood to race
And my thoughts to blur
Thump
Thump
Pound
Thump
Thump
Pound
The beating of my heart
Races even faster
As the impulses
Starts to take over
And my thoughts blur
Thump
Thump
Pound
The urge to go
Just do it
Thump
Thump
Pound
The yearn to not care
To be able to keep going
Thump Thump Pound
Thump Thump Pound
Faster and Faster
My heart keeps going
And my desire takes over
Da-dun da-dun da-dun
Sometimes I wish
I could ignore
My impulses
A contest entry
- Title contest...come and see...... by parntsoftwins.
300 points, ended December 28, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So?
Comments
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I enjoyed this take on the prompt. The way you wrote this poem as well describing the beating of the heart speeding up trying to resist the "impulse" Nicely written I enjoyed this! Thank you for the entry.~Nikki
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dude, this is totally and completely...
FREAKING AMAZING AND A HALF AND THREE QUARTERS AND FIFTY-SEVEN FREAKING EIGHTHS!!!!
i love it~kudos!
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i like it.
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wtf?
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