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Keeping Optimistic!

Shall we pay the MasterCard,
or should we pay the Visa?
We can't make up our minds,
it really is a teaser.

Perhaps settle the electric bill,
or spend winter in the dark.
But then if we don't pay the rent,
It's winter in the park!

Or should we pay the council tax;
avoiding bailiffs at the door?
They could take away our lovely bed,
meaning cold nights on the floor.

This winter will be very lean,
we've got in such a muddle.
I'm off work and feeling poorly,
so finances we must juggle.

I wish some one would pay me,
for writing heartfelt verse.
Maybe in the new year,
our fortunes will reverse!


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  • TwiztidMaggot
    December 20, 2007
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    I like this. it's really good. Keep up your amazing work!!! I'm loving it!

    Crimson


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 19, 2007
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    one of your great reality poems how true these traumas are , thanks dear ann xx