The emptiness hollows out my heart when the color of his eyes grows brighter at the mention of her name.
Held in the captivity of my ribcage, loneliness tugs at my heart strings when the sound of his name and hers create a melody sweeter than my name could ever sound standing next to his.
The smile I'd try so desperately give him would be dull and fit awkwardly against his mouth compared to the one she effortlessly kissed in place.
...I am clumsily in love with Boy Wonder...
but there are chain link fences barricading my vocal chords and I forcibly swallow down each 'I love you' that takes refuge in my esophagus.
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He has no idea that the smile I'm wearing, is the one he gave me.
this isn't finished...i'll come back to it later.
any title suggestions?
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This is so beautifully written. I love it. I know this is such a painful feeling and you've managed to turn it into something beautiful. Wonderful write doll.
xx
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"The emptiness hollows out my heart when the color of his eyes grows brighter at the mention of her name.
Held in the captivity of my ribcage, loneliness tugs at my heart strings when the sound of his name and hers create a melody sweeter than my name could ever sound standing next to his.
The smile I'd try so desperately give him would be dull and fit awkwardly against his mouth compared to the one she effortlessly kissed in place."
I love this!
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aww you used it!!! i feel so lovededed!! ♥ ily!
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i fucking loved this.
i feel just like this right now.
title suggestion hmm...
taped over my foam heart? oorrrr i dunno lol i cant think right now hunnie
<3
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suggestion for the title: the anatomy of love (?) or something along those lines...
i thought of that because you refrence so many body parts and such, i thought it would fit ^.^
so far you are up to a great start!
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