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Her Gifts

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Sitting on the table
waiting to be delivered,
two hand crafted stuffed toys,
made each year for shelter's children,
always bringing such hugs and smiles
from sweet, but abused hearts.

Always be told they come from Santa,
no child ever aware
they were the product of feeble hands
belonging to blind grandmother
while resting in her bed,
whose love for others took
dim eyes could not mar..

Presents shared by adults
that once themselves received
one of her treasures,
finding out later their source,
granny's heart reborn in them
the truest of her gifts.

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  • georgie
    December 19, 2007

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    awwww this is gorgeous... i remember a year i couldnt afford presents for my kids and heard a knock on the door... two guys were standing there asking for my kids by name... naturally i freaked. they were like... no we're from the salvation army and have a box of goodies for your children. i cried then and there. ill never forget one was a knitted teddy tho i gave to my youngest and she still adores him today. i only wish i could thank whoever put the time and effort into making him to bring a smile to a beautiful little girls face,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    this is such a beautifud tender write and the scene and images painted within this is beautiful. thankyou so much

  • Judith Chandler
    December 19, 2007

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    what a beautiful poem, such love on the part of the old lady. I really like this; it's the spirit of Christmas

  • Virginia Logsdon
    December 19, 2007

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    This is very nice!Sometimes, God can work in people who are obscure and unnoticed more than we can imagine!


  • StarEyes
    December 19, 2007

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    What a great job on this one! There is pure magic in this read! This is great! This year all the kids, young and old, are getting stuffed animals, and I am not sure why Just something I decided to do. Love the magic in this one!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    This is a very nice poem on percy and curly I love it and yes they would bring hope and love to a child in need best wishes goodluck in the contest


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 19, 2007

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    this is stunningly beautiful to me...soft spot to my heart, children...best to you in the contest...blessings always ~Trisha~


  • poet2angels gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    This is so touching and beautiful...Such a feeling of the Season this beings!

    Lovely poetry!

    Lynda

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