Multifacted droplets of a diamond source
falling, not clattering, a gentle force
made of heart, and made of mind
two shy hearts, a world without line
inspired by dream, emotions spread
brought out like a book to be read
You put me on the other side
of being lonely
I've got you and me and the azure sky
to hold me...
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damn this is good
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Oh, wow. Thanks!
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so simply and beautifully put....
you've managed to capture the essence without putting too much burden on it or binding it at all...
lovely
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Thank you...!
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Dreamy, sounds like a perfect fantasy.
I really like the last four lines.
They're like the perfect "I love you", without having to use the three simple words that seem to have lost meaning and are just thrown around like an old baseball anymore these days.
The whole write makes me think of drifting far up in the empyrean sky amid the serein rains with my angel.
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Yes, I agree. The last lines are easily my favorite. Thank you very much!
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