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Let me take you down

Come now and I’ll take you down
To the place by the canal
Where all is quiet, all is still
And the wind is blowing.

Let me make you a fine cake
And pour you a glass of wine,
Come, laugh and enjoy the party
And you will be my darling.

Let’s make a picture for a joke
And laugh and sing
Let’s be happy
By the old dirty waters.

And I will buy you a chair
And you will buy me a ticket,
And we’ll be playing with the big boys,
Darling, please, let us.

Then when the chair is bought
Let’s burn a heap of rags
A million dead men’s bones
Were burnt so long ago.

So come, my darling, let us
We’ll stay alone and quiet
Have the trip of a lifetime
On wine, cakes and real life.

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  • Vagabond Samurai
    January 11, 2008

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    This was an interesting piece of work, especially the ending which resembles a ritualistic homage to the dead before enjoying cake, wine, and life. Concepts with which I can relate to are delivered well here.