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Winter's Pleasures

Winter approaches on frolicking feet,
Leaving roses glowing in eye and on cheek.
Icicle sparkles reflecting the light,
Enhancing the feel of approaching delight.

Wonder and amazement on each child’s face,
Pure innocent joy brightens every place.
Fresh fallen snow is a magical shine,
As Winter fires warm like a sweet glass of wine.

Drift off to sleep with a smile in the soul,
Enjoy the season; love, heal and be whole.
Listen close in the silence and I know you will hear,
“Merry Christmas, my friends, and a Happy New Year!”


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Word Bank contest:

snow, drift, icicle, bright, Merry, frolicking,
wonder, delight, pure, magical.

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  • DogontheComet
    January 10, 2008

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    WOW! You did a good job at that Word Bank. I think I'd find it hard to do. I really liked your poem. the rhythm flowed really well.
    Take it easy and Have a good one,
    Herman


  • Frozentearz
    December 30, 2007

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    This was a wonderful winter delight and I thank you for joining in our fun
    Hope you had a wonderful Christmas
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • Frogzter gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    Wonderful Christmas delight! Love the rhyme and the message within! THanks for entering and a very Merry Christmas to you as well!

    Frogz~


    • Glata
      December 19, 2007
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      Thank you bunches! I love doing word banks...and Tearz and I go wayyy back )
      Glata