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my everything

you are my everything that makes me smile
the thing i treasure the most in life
my everything is you my love
you mean everything to me
so please always be my everything
i will always be here for you
if i was to say the thing the most important is you
your love gives me strength and a smile
so you are my everything and love of my life
so stay for ever and keep me warm and safe from harm

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 10, 2008

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    I know what you mean, there is someone like that for me too and he's the bestest thing ever! he's awesome.


  • broken.inside
    December 19, 2007

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    its a touching and delicate poem and i enjoyed it but it didn't really grab my attention all that well, also you forgot to put your age and option number in your authors notes. please do so, thank you for entering and good luck


  • ShadowSoul
    December 19, 2007

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    Sweet!!

    Aww this is a gorgeous poem so glad to see it's not all bad in your mind at the moment, and your heart still has some love in it I'm glad someone can make you feel that way even through these dark times