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this can't go on

this can't go on anylonger
all the fake smiles and happiness
the trying to please everyone else instead of myself
trying to not let others see my true self
this can't go on any more
letting everyone control my life and then walk out
giving in to what the others want of me
being pushed aside against a wall
letting them act as though i do not exist
living my life in fear
this can't go on any longer

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  • ShadowSoul
    December 19, 2007

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    It won't go on much longer, i promise, its just growing up darling, but good use of emotion tho "being pushed aside against a wall letting them act as though i do not exist", thats awesome imagery right there