i am trapped but yet free from this world
trapped in the deppression yet on the outside i seem free
how is this you ask
well i let others see me happy and not the truth
truth of pain and hurt
the hurt of rejection and losing someone so close
some one so close to you that you feel dead too
trapped yet free is what i am
this is a world of entrapment and freedom
but i am involved of both
so look at me and see what you may
i am here for anyone who needs me
i am your good friend
a shoulder to cry on and the friend whos trapped but free
free on the outside where you all can see
but trapped in a cage on the iseide waiting to be set free
A contest entry
- Trapped....... by BeautifulCurse.
600 points, ended December 29, 2007, 33 entries
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its really hard to read what you wrote with the red on that background... but hide the background is an awesome tool...there are some spelling and grammar errors.. but other than that this is pretty good.. its very interesting.. and the title you chose is very intriguing... great write and good luck..
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trapped yet free, thats an awesome title, an oxymoron i think they're called, contradicting eachother, but is still makes sense. I love your lines "this is a world of entrapment and freedom but i am involved of both", it points out your pain as well as saying you are connected with the pains of the world but you're free aswell, which is really sad...
I like it Jessy
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