i am broken on the inside masking it by my smiles
broken and crying on the inside
trying to make myself understand that you never loved me
understanding that you rejected me
i am your broken daughter and you do not care
you broke me and then left me stranded alone
broken inside with tears falling when i am alone
the pain is so great yet i put a brave smile on
a smile to make others see a happy person
not the broken down useless gurl i am
good for nothing and still surviving
you can breck me yet you won't fix me
Author notes
written to my no good father
A contest entry
- Broken by JustAnotherIdoit.
450 points, ended December 21, 2007, 19 entries
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gurl=girl
but i liked it. very sad. thanks for the entry. -
Sad..
Quick and blunt, he's a fool for even thinking of hurting such a talented and poetic young lady, shame on him, forcing you to hide behind a smile to hide your real emotion, this is real emotion, and i'm glad you're not hiding your smile from me
- Joshi
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