So you ask me how I got here.
My head in the wall.
Do you really have the time
to listen to it all.
The day began at five am.
A little early I must say.
It started out just as others had.
Just like any other day.
Then on the way to work I went
and I tripped upon an ant.
You don't believe me,
You say you just can't?
Well the wall was just finished
Just earlier that morning.
They didn't leave a sign,
not a single warning.
But the ant was not the one
who got me stuck this way.
Nor was it the bee,
the dog or the hay.
Who do you ask was the culprit,
who could of done such a thing.
Well you wouldn't believe it,
but an untied shoe string.
Author notes
Wow it has been a while since a contest inspired me.. and the first ever to inspire me to rhyme. Bravo on the contest it was soo much fun. I hope you enjoy this..
A contest entry
- Let's Have a Little Fun, Shall We? by joyya.
900 points, ended December 31, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LARGEST AP CONTEST EVER!!!! by Princess Peach.
646 points, ended March 1, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I get up at 6:40, so I know how you feel about waking up at 5:00 am! ;-) Never enough sleep! I liked this entry and I see that it won a silver! Best of luck in the contest and thanks for entering!


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Haha, a nice bit of humor to lighten the mood! Cute!
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Laughing. This is cute and I liked it a lot. We have all fallen prey to the untied shoe. Thank you for entering my contest.


