freely she cuts a swathe,
in turquoise hues
skimming skies and
hearts,
with bells on...
A contest entry
- sleigh by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short and sweet. Great write. Happy trails
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breathtakingly beautiful!
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'skimmimg skies and hearts...'
what a brilient iimage.. it just has a feel, albeit a wee bit lonly, for if ye areskimming hearts as opposed to delveing into them, then ye miss so much. but then, i did always read poetry oddly. 'tis a beautiful peice sweetling
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Very nice! I enjoyed the "skimming skies and hearts with bells on..." Congrats on the gold!
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just lovely elaine!
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thank you so much
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beautiful...i love the sound of this, the way it rolls off the tongue.
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lol..I love 'with bells on' ..
great take on the prompt..I like the personification..
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I like the idea of you in bells
haha, i'm a dirty girl, i know
but this is beautiful, nice work with the prompt, anything but preditable.
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yeah i kind of like the idea of me wearing bells
it was just fun to write and is what came ut of my fingers
well i never did you ever
see a bunny made of leather
leather ears and leather nose
and siver bells upon his toes...
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This is lovely....
~ Nicolette
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