She dreams,
intense visions
of love in fading gloom,
as the ocean reflects her thoughts;
in blue
Author notes
Cinquain poems are 5 line poems with a syllable count format of 2, 4, 6, 8 ,2. If I have made an error, please do not think I will be offended by alerting me to it.
In a list
A contest entry
- Poet's Choice III by Luna Tique Fringe.
1750 points, ended May 25, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
Comments
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A beautiful piece...very elegant. The imagery reveals the emotion. Thanks for entering.
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Excellent ciquain
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Excellent work!
This is a great write and I love it. Short forms are a fave of mine and you did splendidly with this. It flows, it evokes thought and is just lovely. Good job!!
hugs Mum
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I love this form, and I love your poem. You made me see blue in shades of romance swaying in cooler breezes...This is beautiful!
Lynda
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I appreciate your candid comments cousin, somehow I thought this might stir your emotions and senses. Thanks for the affirmation on a piece I was unsure about the value of.
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A beautiful cinquain, wonderfully worded and I love the graphic -oh, I am sorry the contest closed so you could not enter it! (hint-I am going to put an etheree one up tonight or tomorrow)
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I was worried I had made a faux pas.
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nature finds its beauty as it lulls a heart within its passion!
Yes once again I did enjoy this!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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