I hate you when your angry,
I hate you when your sad,
I hate you when you get upset,
I hate you when your mad,
Your irrational, upsetting, uncaring and quite mean
You complain too much and your food makes me turn green
It's all ways my fault never yours
You never seem to change your mind
It doesnt matter what I say your mind has closed its doors
And in every single thing I do a problem you seem to find
I hate how you complain that lifes unfair
I hate the way you hate to brush your freakin' hair
I hate the fact that I can't go to ApleBees cause of you
I hate your irrational fears too
But Im afraid this hate does pale
Next to the benifits your life does entail
I really have a lot of fun with you
Even though I sometimes wish you would be eaten by a Grue.
I love you Sister.
Author notes
This one is about my sister so it might be different from everyone elses who seem to be writing about romantic love.
A contest entry
- 10 things i hate about you by flaed.
550 points, ended December 24, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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whats a grue???
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OH good one! I like the beat this poem has it grows on you. And of course I like the "eaten by a grue' Lol good write and heartwarming.
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good poem... but what is Grue?
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A grue is a fictional creature that instintly eats you if you enter the darkness.
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i really like it alot.
verry eligant word choice.
nice flow and voice.
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I have made the five comments. In addition The title got cut off there was supposed to be a :and ninety seven things I hate about you after the above part.
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tell me which 5 poems and who's
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