The skies above do not shine Love
She fears the cold again
Another one to black the sun
The Last Rose in the Rain
Soiled and dark beneath the mark
She has habits for her pain
Buried deep into defeat
The Last Rose in the Rain
Empty tomb the silent doom
Alone is her true name
Take her face to another place
To the Last Rose in the Rain
Pick apart the fragile heart
Of a flower lost in time
Stain the hand of a shapeless land
Where the Last Rose waves in mime
The sky did fall and killed them all
She kneels and wilts in vain
Hit the mud and pick the bud
Of the Last Rose in the Rain
Author notes
One of my personal favorites, originally written sometime in early 2006
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Wow. This is amazing. I love it. On a scale from one to ten I'd give it a 10! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
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Crap I pushed the wrong button and accidentally removed it from the contest :s sowwe
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This is very nice I wish you the best of luck in my contest thank you for entering
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Oh. This is a nice little poem that you have here. It is kind of a sad tale to tell but I guess that everything can't be happy can it? I thought you did a good job of expressing the feeling of a woman going throught that kind of thing. Lestways, I thought so.
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"Pick apart the fragile heart
Of a flower lost in time
Stain the hand of a shapeless land
Where the Last Rose waves in mime " lovely lines
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thanks for sharing
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wow that was so awesome and it had such a good flow
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LOL... change the part about 'alone' being her name to 'feral' and ull have written about me lol. seriously though... this is a mystical beautiful work of art,
hugs,
georgie,
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WOW... wow.. this is almost like you have written this about me.. the way you have used such emotion about some one.. that i take as some one that loved.. i love it..
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