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陰陽 (Yin & Yang)

She is fire and Air
She is water and Earth
The primal opposing sisters
dancing in opposing styles
however respective to each others
complementary comic forces.

She is Light and Love
She is Darkness and Hate
Daughters of the universe
Fathered by Crucible 
Mothered by paradoxical laws.
The sisters are one yet
separate for celestial stability among mortals.


She is the Sun
She is the Moon
As she warms and lights the world
the other waits for the twilight hour
she hangs her shining charm in the night sky
as the sister of the sun sleeps until dawn.
The sister who speaks to angels
The sister who speaks to demons
They together divided the universe
guardians’ of oppositions’, twin sister paradoxing one another.
Gently they stand back to back never knowing
each other true faces, but knowing that the other sister
will never allow cycle of separation to break.

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  • Mykeee
    December 19, 2007

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    There U go - I like how you put a strong feminine spin to this. Its classic balance of the universe. the proverbial Yin Yang. taking the prompt and placing power to it. Good luck - Mykeeee


    • Freestyle Bushido
      December 20, 2007
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      thank, I took your advice and tried to work more on my form while keeping my style for this piece.


  • MahoganyFlow
    December 19, 2007

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    You do such a wonderful job with these contest! The depiction of this picture was on point. Hope you do well in this. Keep Writing!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    Oh fantastic take... Balance is the key to most things I belive... Well done.. and thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila

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