in a fetal position,
she's sleeping peacefully...
waiting for fate
to take her home.
Author notes
Prompt: Where did she go?
8-16 words.
A contest entry
- Where did she go? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 19, 2007, 21 entries
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That certainly says a lot. Sounds like it is signed, sealed and delivered but very tranquil.
The poem is well composed also.
jjj
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I think it's lovely actually...
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very good thanks for entering
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Intriguing...
What you should do is make a sequel to this.. saying what happens when fate takes her away.... this is a great start to a very good and big poem.
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Nicely crafted ~ very well set imagery. Loved the ending. Nicely done.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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