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A rendezvous with Jack.

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The night was tranquil,

cloisters of tiny stars formed

like snowflakes that glistened

in the moonlight.

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She knew he would call

so she waited to greet him,

posing elegantly tall

with her outstretched arms.

****

He came silently,

wrapping himself around her

like a boa, leaving his

mark of freezing breath and

crystalising her nudity to

sparkle in the sun of winter.

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  • love my jose luis
    February 8, 2008

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    I like this I could see the winter coming to take over autum, it was a beautiful poem. Thank you for your entry and the best of luck to you.
    ~Maria


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 9, 2008

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    "crystalising her nudity to

    sparkle in the sun of winter."

    beautiful line to describe it, thanks for entering


  • Pure Thought silver member
    January 1, 2008
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    Congrats, beautifully written


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    Beautiful!!!

    I love it!!! Jack Frost never seemed so magical to me before now... This is a wonderful poem, Lady Ireland!!! Your talent never ceases to amaze me!!! Peace and love, Rose of Ireland


  • Mat Larkin
    December 19, 2007
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    well done Dear...

    lovely vivid images that tell a story..

    Slan, Mat


  • delightfulmess silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    Oh I am always excited to see one of yours posted...
    This is Sensational... Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • FransB gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    I read this a couple of times - the 1st time it had a different meaning, and then by the second and third time, its beautiful meaning ushered me into nature. Good luck. Frans

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