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Remember Me Always


 

My precious one

I still remember hovering over you
feeling your soul
stir beneath my hands

I think of warm summer nights
chasing  the stars
in a moonlight cruise together

And passion screams
across the lake
as the gulls enjoyed their dinner

I remember you
how beautiful you are
the way we loved completely

A lifetime of words
seeing your eyes smile
deeply shared love and care

And never in my life
would I trade the time
we held our hearts together

and always
and forever
will I remember your lovely face

p
lease

 

Remember Me



LeeL

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Words for my wonderfull friend

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  • michellemybelle gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    Hi Rick, just rereading, so lovely. Certianly a well deserved gold. I am sure you will always be remembered, love like that is never completely lost.
    love,
    Michelle

  • amysticwriter silver member
    December 20, 2007
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    Awesome...

    Your poems are always beautiful...you are such a romantic poet...


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 20, 2007
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      Lady Mary


      Yes I am a romantic
      Some ladies have loved me for it

      I am like my words
      Thank you, Rick


  • rlmcmd
    December 20, 2007

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    You are a visionary

    You have captured another timeless moment, and shared it with the world as no other man can do. In all the world, only you could make these words..and make them so stunningly beautiful. For that my brother, you will be remembered forever.

    And passion screams
    across the lake
    as the gulls enjoyed their dinner

    As romantic a metaphor as it gets concerning loving.

    Just excellent!

    Thought you might like to know, your book is now available on Barns and Noble, Amazon.com, Boarders, etc.
    Bob


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 20, 2007
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      Dr. Bob


      Thank you for always liking my words

      Thank you for taking care of the other sites
      for the book, That is so Good... Your CooL

      Rick


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    What a wonderfully beautiful and soft piece, this is!
    Sigh...
    Ultra romantic
    A beautiful sharing!

    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Hi Angel


      Thank you for saying "ultra romantic"

      Very nice

      Rick


  • littlelouise
    December 19, 2007

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    Wow. Just Wow! The poem captured so much feeling and emotion. It made me feel what you feel. An un dieing love, expressed so flawlessly. Well done!

    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Louise


      Interesting picture
      Thank you for reading and feeling my words

      Me


  • Desire gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    Beautiful!!

    Wonderful weaving of words my Friend
    and the passion also emotions spill from Your quill

    And never in my life
    would I trade the time
    we held our hearts together

    Love this!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart
    and Spirit!
    Many blessings to You in the contest
    Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Desire


      Always love when you comment on me
      Thank you for quoting me
      and for the three Smilies

      Me


  • ennovy silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    Well how can a lady forget these wonderful events you bring to mind. A moonlight cruse, dinner together. Just completely loving and mesmerizing. Write ON! O'talented Poet...................novy


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Hi Novy


      Thank you for your kind comment
      Read again, the Guls were haveing dinner
      we were being bad... lol

      Me


  • snowbird600
    December 19, 2007

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    Remember me always.........

    The warm summer nights on a moonlight cruise.
    Memories are brought back. Very nice thoughts.
    I'm sure she will appreciate your words of expression.
    How could she ever forget?
    Fine job on the write! Hope you get lots of good comments on your poem and win the contest!
    Steffany


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Hi Stef


      Thank you for reading me
      I think we all have memories
      that linger, even after the person is gone
      Thank you for commenting so nicely

      Me


  • StarEyes
    December 19, 2007

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    What a beautiful read! And how could she not remember with words like this?

    I know she will always remember that love also......

    Best of luck in this contest!

    Nyetta


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Nyetta


      Thank you for wishing me luck
      and for the three Smilies

      You are always kind

      Me


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    Completely from the heart. A blessed way to remember a most treasured time in two lives. Your words show so deeply and clearly the intent of your mind and soul to throughout eternity treasure this precious gift that was shared. Poetic wonder here...so lovely I weep. Thanks for bringing back life to true romance and love. I know she will remember you and as often as she does...she will know you remember her as well.

    Always a blessing to be invited inside such a tender soul Rick. Many blessings to you my friend.

    Love~
    Sue


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007

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      Hi Sue


      This is from my heart
      She realy made an imprint on my soul

      Sorry you wept, thank you for feeling this

      Me


      • SummerlandRayne gold member
        December 19, 2007
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        Thanks Me...

        I always weep when I read your deep writes! Cleansing for the soul. Poetry is meant to evoke deep emotion, so you are just doing a wonderful job with your art!

        Blessings~
        Sue


  • Twinstar
    December 19, 2007

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    Beautiful and very sentimental poem. Always so elegantly crafted. Very touching!
    Love & Light
    Debbera

    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Hi Debbra


      Thank you for reading me

      Elegant is good, thank you

      Me


  • michellemybelle gold member
    December 19, 2007
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    HI Rick.
    I can't help but to cry as I read these beautiful, loving, sad words. This is a lovely way to remember a deep love that I know she will remember.
    I could quote every word as my favorite.
    blessings and love,
    Michelle


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Sweet Michelle


      This was one of my hardest verses to write
      some just leave an endless mark on us
      Such is my life
      I cried as well as I crafted the words, to make them right

      Me


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    When you love, you love with all you have,
    How could anyone in their right mind,
    not remember you. Your words are precious,
    believe me, my friend she will remember.
    You touch her soul and stole her heart.
    I am sure she just loved this.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Hi Joyce


      Yes I do love completely
      it is a blessing and a burdone to me

      Thank you for your kind words

      Me

  • Ankeeta silver member
    December 18, 2007
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    hey is it soul or cruise?...anyway AWESOME piece...its soo sweet in sound ..keep going

    A


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Hi A


      I made the changes
      I am a spelling retard
      That is why I paid an Editor
      to edit my book

      Thank you, Me


  • HeavensNewestAngel
    December 18, 2007

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    This is a great poem you wrote. Your friend is lucky to have you as a friend and that you wrote this for him/her. Thank you for putting your title number in your authors box. Good luck in my contest


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Hi Angel


      Thank you for saying Great
      I wrote this for "a her"
      Thank you for wishing me luck

      Me


  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Now that you have gone
    Your salve voice is far away
    It rings and tinkles still,
    Not in my ears.
    All that I have is the echo of its silver.
    The rest is fire and stinging hurt
    That makes my songs today in rememerence
    of yesterday...
    Great poem. Good luck in contest


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Hi Judy


      Good interpation of my words

      Thank you for saying Good Luck
      and for the cute little Bunnies

      Me

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