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Speechless

My heart is beating through my chest
I'd say the words
But I forget

Oh,look at what you've done to me
Word vommit,babbling

Pulling on my hair
Staring at my feet
Toungue tied and heart in a knot
There's a lot I'd like to say to you
But I have a mouth full of rocks

Author notes

This wasn't inspired by a current situation,but a memory. I just remember this feeling so clearly it was awful but wonderful at the same time.I hope you like and can relate to it

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  • just a voice
    December 30, 2007

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    Yeah... I know the feeling. I think we all do at some point. You've done well here though, to capture the feelings and all. Great job. Nice flow.