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Inflamed Lust

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Each morning I wake arms empty,
reaching out for you.
Wild wanton fantasies day and night,
if only you knew.

Your lyrics seduce, feeling your caress,
soft and fine.
Licking my lips, longing to sip
and savor this wine.

Often your verses start
a burning lust in me.
A passion fighting, to combust,
to run free.

There is a very thin line
between lust and love.
Virtual friendship, who knows
what will become of?

From your silver tongue,
your words gently flows.
Waking up excitement,
infatuation grows.

Continue to pen your prose,
light my  fire.
Virtually whisper your poems,
ignite my desire.

Author notes

Dedicated to Mykeee, his poem that he dedicated to me inspired me to write a small verse on the comment, so I took that verse and I have expanded it, hope you like Mykeee, thank you for the inspiration.

raingoddess

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  • ennovy silver member
    December 18, 2007

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    Enchanting Tribute

    This is just such a beautiful tribute to MyKeee and I know he will enjoy the read as well as the words. Men love to be special too. You did a great job on this write. I feel this was deep, emotional, adoration from the top to the bottom of the read.....Write ON!...aquene novy


  • Brazos silver member
    December 18, 2007

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    Excellent Rain

    I love the way you have penned this, you are fantastic writer.

    "There is a very thin line
    between lust and love.
    Virtual friendship, who knows
    what will become of?"

    "Continue to pen your prose,
    light my fire.
    Virtually whisper your poems,
    ignite my desire."

    My two favorite stanzas, you go girl.

    Brazos




    • raingoddess gold member
      December 18, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thank you very much Brazos, he loved it and I am glad that you enjoyed it as well.

      raingoddess


  • Ephiphany
    December 18, 2007

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    Ooooohhh....

    yall HOT
    This is absolutely beautiful tribute to Key...sure he loves it

    Imagery was wonderful.
    Piff


  • Mykeee
    December 18, 2007

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    LOL!!! How can I not like this? another amazing seductive piece. Pulling me in. Showing sweet emotion and respectful. Just a great piece. I also loved the way you expanded it. ~ Muah!!

    Mykeeee

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