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Night Before Christmas !

Twas the night before Christmas,
Mom was loosening her blouse.
All the kids were not stirring,
None in the house.
Pop was in bed waiting,
As ready as could be.
Ready for Mom to keep him company.
She climbed in beside him,
As eager as can be.
Looking forward to this opportunity.
He reached out to hug her,
Pulling her real close.
Then the fire started,
Passion just cut loose.
They made the bed shudder,
As covers hit the floor.
They kept right at it,
Till they just could do no more.

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  • Dusty Rose
    December 18, 2007

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    LOL..well this was a nice surprise... I enjoyed reading this so much I had to take a second look...Great job! Thank you so much for entering and good luck..

    Dusty


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 18, 2007

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    G-R-A-M-P-S What the heck Got in to you. Nice poem think this is the second on o n this sorta subject I have seen.