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The best kind of addiction

You are addicted
to my dicktion
and I am addicted
to your friction
but as long as
theres no restriction
then this isn't
an affliction
I like to kiss you on your lips
and also on your mouth
and your addicted to my licktion
when I'm going down south
and I'm addicted to the way
that you move n bump n grind
thats why even now
I got you fixed in my mind
you're addicted
to my passion
and I am addicted
to you Asstion
its a mutual
attraction
when we're gettin'
some action
I like your body's shape
its so fine and dandy
and I love the way you taste
you're my favorite kinda candy
and I love the way you feel
when I'm deep inside you're spot
and that my friend is why
you're the best addiction that I've got.

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  • chels-ea
    April 20
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    I absolutley loved the way you played with your words in this.


  • OctoberCrush
    November 23, 2008
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    Ahaha...
    I laughed a whole lot.
    Hopefully it was meant to be a joke...

    That was great.


  • isles of wild
    July 12, 2008
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    LOL I thought this was great.Great play on words. Great way to play............


  • RawrItsKrista
    June 4, 2008

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    Was this supposed to be funny? Because I could not stop laughing. Don't get me wrong, this is a good poem. I just like some of the words you used. Great Job!


  • Ace13
    March 31, 2008
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    HA HA HA

    Really halarious. you must of been high when you wrote this though.


  • queenmab
    February 16, 2008

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    oh wow

    dude you get a standing ovation to quote a friend of mine i was caught between the smile on my face and the applause in my ears

    bravo, bravo indeed

    cheers


  • midnightstar
    January 7, 2008
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    haha this (in my head) sounds like i should be like sing/talking this poem to that "you and me baby aint nothin but mammals so lets do it like they do on the discovery channel" song by bloodhound gang. I lovee itttt and if someone wrote this for me, id def. jump on them!!


  • gigglepot
    December 31, 2007
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    reading this will make any girls spot hot.


  • SoRrYhErLoT
    December 29, 2007
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    Pink pussy background!!! LOL

    Damn bongmaster!! It's been a while since I've commented your shit, and I have to say this is phenomenal! I love the rhyme scheme and I love how you automatically made the audience think that this would be another poem about a narcotic. It's beautiful!! I hope you get to read some of mine soon!

    Peace love and LSD,
    Ashlyn Danae


  • Sunless
    December 22, 2007
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    i like this.. its different then some of you other stuff, but i like it.

  • zooman hue
    December 22, 2007
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    Amusing and deeply flattering...

    Nice beat and 'Beatle-ish' rhyme - sweet.


  • pugsleyislove
    December 21, 2007
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    haha

    i love it!


  • Hearta
    December 18, 2007
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    still an addiction

    only if the licking is sticking
    to the hot spot
    turns the feelings on
    control a womans body
    like a power controlled robot
    in human form like passion far from the norm
    sultry and sensual
    like a "pie" cannibal
    for your addiction
    just might be fiction

    sounds good to me! ;D


  • Poetic Butterfly
    December 18, 2007

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    I have to say I really like this...may not be your norm, but it's still good 2 me


    PoetricButterfly

  • Nighttime angel
    December 18, 2007

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    well I think this is cool. different is sometimes good, sometimes not.. I personally think this is good.

    kat


  • risewiththesmoke
    December 18, 2007
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    umm. no. sorry.


    • King Bongmaster
      December 18, 2007
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      it said think outside the box...

      • risewiththesmoke
        December 18, 2007
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        its not the topic. completely honestly, most of your stuff that ive read is amazing, but this... pretty much sucks. not your best work. im trying to be honest, not bitchy.

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