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[ between time and space ]

between time and space
through years of pain
for years of torture
ive got nothing

so many days
and endless nights
life goes on
i do not

to do
is to have to be
which is something
undesired

to be is to feel
which is something i cant
unexpressed emotions
have now become a wall

untouched, unbroken
the wall stands tall,
hides from the pain
my heart hides from the worries

time is endless, i am ending

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this is just some thing...not sure exactly...

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  • N e a r
    February 3, 2008

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    Superb, especially your ending line.
    This was so envoking and so rad of a poem.

    Thanks for sharing & entering your write in A N Y T H I N G ~ G O E S ! Good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • Naridill
    January 20, 2008

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    Some stark emotions you have messed with here. Very beautiful and yet gripping to strings and more.


  • chiquita-banana-
    December 18, 2007

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    This is really good... I understand what you are trying to say... the only suggestion I have is that u put a little bit more detail into it...