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Promise Of Peace




Mirrored etchings from nature's tapestry, as promised, when lips whispered "you shall see"

On proffered arms comes glowing light, subtly nudging quiet sea, leaving imprint of earth's sky in all it's glory

Warmth of breath settling on monolithic pieces, each sentinel, vivid, standing eternal.

Blue cumulus swathes mingle the gold,
woven through time.

Quiet moments as breath subsides,
settles as feather down, succumbs to peace.

 

 

Author notes

The link for the hosts picture for the inspiration for my entry.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2382454

A contest entry

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  • haikumonk gold member
    December 31, 2007

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    The poem is a tapestry and though brief it is definitely not incomplete. Wonderful write. Congrats on the HM...


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    peace found within the silence of nature's glory where memories are simply made!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • dustookie2
    December 19, 2007

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    Nice interpretation on the prompt..you painted the picture well in your words. Good luck in the contest.


    • wishintreeUK
      December 20, 2007
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      Thank you dustookie2 for taking the time to read and comment on my entry, I do appreciate it.


  • Quiet places
    December 19, 2007

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    Excellent write!!

    Such imagery in your poem! Drwas the reader into the pic to feel the feeling of peace at the grand moment of times one time shot! Very creative and perfectly woven! Excellent job! Do

    • wishintreeUK
      December 21, 2007

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      Thank you Quiet places for the honorable winner and for the points, it was a pleasure to write for this contest. The quality of the entries was excellent, the winners did extremely well, congratulations to everyone and thank you to our host for the opportunity of being able to write for this contest.

      ~Katie~


      • Quiet places
        December 21, 2007
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        Thank you Katie for the wonderful entry in my contest!! A pleasure to read!! Don


  • Sunshine Always
    December 18, 2007

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    Superb my dearest friend as always. Your soothing words bring with them the wonderful imagery that I have come to know with your work. Excellent Katie. Good luck with this little gem.....Hugs...mal

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