In my twisted fantasy
She haunts my every memory
I lose myself in her image
And I’ve never spoken to her
I want to be near her
But I’m too scared to approach
She is beautiful
But I am put on edge around her
Can’t you see I love you?
This passion is tearing me apart
I get chills and my skin burns
When I am in her presence
I long to tell her my feelings
But I don’t even know her
She fills me with guilt
Shows my imperfect self
I cry inside when I see her
I can’t explain why
My heart pounds at the thought of her
I am tortured by this suffocating crush
I love her
Her name floats around my head
Can’t you see I love you?
I wish it could come to pass
I imagine a family, a happy marriage
But I fear I may be alone forever
Is it better to love and lose?
Or should I never have loved at all?
My unapproachable lady of remorse
I am unrequited
But I love her
A contest entry
- Love Poems. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 49 entries
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I agree with the comment below. This is very.. pretty. However, I can feel the longing and sorrow in this.
I hope that you end/ended up with her in the end.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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This is so beautiful!
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I long to tell her my feelings
But I don’t even know her
She fills me with guilt
Shows my imperfect self
I cry inside when I see her
I can’t explain why
My heart pounds at the thought of her
I am tortured by this suffocating crush
I love her
stunning piece of work this...your heart and soul is exposed for all to see...love this!!!!
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wow
your poems are so well written and from such emotions.
glad you joined AP
i didn't really know you wrote much.
Lovely write
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Wow
This is amazing...You can really really feel the love that you feel for this person, whoever she is.
I really really hope that you can get the courage to talk to whoever it is, or that they start to notice you. You're someone who really deserves it.
Great Job.
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