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Love In The Cold

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Love In The Cold

 

 

 

A bleak afternoon skies heavy and grey

the air filled with love on this cold winters day,

meet by the bridge, he’s waiting for me

I run to his arms, he hugs me with glee.

 

Snow maybe be falling, we haven’t a care

lost in our private world, no-one else there,

together in winter, our moment arrives

love in a snowstorm, the best of our lives.

 

A stroll by the river, his arm round my waist

contented together, no rushing, or haste,

snow piled up high on the branches of trees

the park to ourselves we can do as we please.

 

He opens his coat, so I snuggle inside

next to his body the best place to hide

we kiss amid snowflakes, brushing our faces

they melt into dewdrops, leaving wet traces.

 

The evening is falling, the park gate soon closes

our toes maybe frozen, so cold are our noses

for just these few hours, each other to hold

it feels just like summer, our love in the cold.

 

 

 

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  • jimmy20johns gold member
    January 1, 2008
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    Excellent

    Hi Sue. Why "anonymous"? I take it this piece is by you. A very worthy Gold winner! jimmy


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    you capture all the atmosphere and images so well dear sue brilliant as usual and a worthy winner xx bless

  • A floatingleaf silver member
    December 20, 2007
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    Sue, this is beautiful...remembering the cold, snowy days of Kentucky...mary


  • moonbumps silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    Smoochy coochie wooz....It just puts you right there in the snow with these two lovers...birds eye view, cosying up all snuggly and warm...how I envy them!!!


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    December 18, 2007

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    Excellent

    This poem is excellent a beautiful romantic winters story that when it is read actualy give back faith in the meaning of love. the flow in this poem is perfect and brings the poem alive. all my best wishes Brian.


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    SO SWEET AND TENDER!!!!

    It does indeed feel like the warmth of summer even in winter's cold if one is in love.


  • MidnightAngel-89
    December 18, 2007
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    wow

    great poem

  • Bad Bill
    December 18, 2007

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    Love in the cold,
    so I've been told,
    generates heat--
    when can we meet?

    A romantic and very well-rhymed poem--excellent.

    Bill


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      December 18, 2007
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      Bill you're bad and I'm so glad
      I need warming just a tad,
      Let's get going while it's snowing
      In five minutes we'd be glowing.

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