I see the sun rising over an blue sea.
The pain in my head from another lost night.
I guess that's what I get.
The rocks remind me of someone.
Someone I saw last night.
I guess that's what I get.
I try to remember what exactly what I did.
Who I talked to.
I guess that's what I get.
I guess that's what I get.
My mistake, my misery.
I guess that's what I deserve.
Thinking I am better than her.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired contest 3!! by Quiet places.
600 points, ended December 21, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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What can i say self inflicted
Nice take on the prompt. good luck in the contest. Thank you.
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Intense thought!
A rough night aye!! We get some mixed thoughts on a pic like this huh! Hope you survive the night without fail! Forgetting is something I do alot!! Don
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