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Rami and His Basketball (Iambic octo-metre(I think *gulp*) Its an experiment!!!)

I see Rami holding the ball
Orange and black around it all
Bouncing, bouncing, bobbing so light
Sweaty palms, grasping it so tight.

Face full of concentrated heart
Working hard to score that last part
A point, a game, a championship
If a loss, he’ll tremble his lip.

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just a random try at something...

???o.O???

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