Lost out there alone and scared.
Floating into nothing, calling
out to ears that will never hear you.
Close your eyes and just float free.
Free of pain and free of thaught, just free.
You have always wanted to be here,
so just stay here in this dark
and hallow place.
You can talk all you want or
ignore everything. No one can tell
you what you can or can not do.
Finaly... a place where you can
be happy! So why are you so upset?
Go ahead and cry, it's alright,
just rememer there's no one there to care.
You're all alone, just what you've
always wanted. You're free to do
as you want, yet all you want is
someone to hold you, someone to
take the pain away. But you chose
this path, there's no going back.
So just look past the pain like
you always do and be happy.
But you can't can you? Nothing is
ever good enough for you.
That's why you made this void, isn't it?
So you could hide from yourself?
Only you can't do that can you?
You'll always find yourself, but you're
hiding from them too? You're afraid of heartache.
But don't worry, one day you will learn,
being alone is a part of life.
So just give up and try to be happy.....
Author notes
um ... i was depressed because i was breaking up with my boyfriend who i still love but i had to make a choice and i made it
would you be brutaly honest?
Comments
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i can tell you really wrote your heart out here. sometimes when you feel so low and depressed you can write with such raw emotion that everyone who reads it can feel your pain too. i hope your doin better now love.
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being depressed can allow you to write a masterpiece. i belive you are very close to that here. great write!
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i really like this poem. it's as if u're talking to me but i know ur not. i've been going through alot lately n dealing with depression thinking nobody cares.
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right choice
Mary i do believe that you made the right choice with justin...he was controlling and he was going to ruin your life and i believe that anthony is a better choice for you...this poem lets out your feelings and its very good I LOVE YOU SIS
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