I'm close to the edge
Where the flowers all cry.
My wings have unfolded
now I look to the skies...
Take a step through the doorway
then you reach out your hands.
Taking hold of my spirit
take me to wonderland...
(Chorus)
Come with me to wonderland
I hope your ready to fly...
Come with me to wonderland
It's time to fly the skies...
Come with me to wonderland
I hope your ready to fly...
Come with me to wonderland
It's time to fly the skies...
(Bridge)
You're the star of the show,
it's where the good people go
Come with me to wonderland
Come with me to wonderland...
(Musical Interlude)
I'm close to the edge
Where the flowers all cry.
My wings have unfolded
now I look to the skies...
Take a step through the doorway
then you reach out your hands.
Taking hold of my spirit
take me to wonderland...
(Chorus)x2
Come with me to wonderland
I hope your ready to fly...
Come with me to wonderland
It's time to fly the skies...
Come with me to wonderland
I hope your ready to fly...
Come with me to wonderland
It's time to fly the skies...
A contest entry
- A good Lyric by Kiddy.
385 points, ended January 7, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Intelligent write....
It affects me more intensely than any other lyric... It did justice to its form... It reaches me in two different levels... this type of total effect was I looked for...
I could see/ visualize the scene and listen to the music as well....
Very good combination of form and substance... Well done... Every line sweeps over me as an image...
Thanks for sharing
love
-Kiddy
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Thank You
Thank you Kiddy...
I am glad this was the sort of Lyrics you was looking for. Thanks for awarding them with the Gold Award.
All the best,
~T.S~
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