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Sounds of The Soul

Music is the sound of the soul.

Music is a creative goal.

Music is a passion of us all.

Music is rhythm or rhyme.

Music waits for a applause.

Music is great even out doors.

Music has a space in between.

Music has a cultural sounds.

Especially when sang in rounds.

Music picks us up when we fall.

Although we may not like it all.

Music is a adventure of time.

Music is rhythm or rhyme.


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  • notyetfree
    September 30
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    Awesome write!!

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    September 28
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    Ah..I can relate with it..stating that there is a refined connection with the music and the souls of ours..true..so true..

  • Ylova silver member
    September 28
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    This is incredible. I am a huge fan of music. I love it with all my hear and sould and I wouldn't be able to live without it. This was such an amazing write
    Good work!

  • Rajpal Singh
    September 21

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    Hey Maralisa! I read your poem 'Sounds of the soul'. It is good poem written in light mood. But don't add picture on the background, because it makes the letters illegible. I am Rajpal from India. My email is phi_rajpal@rediffmail.com

  • nichtmich silver member
    September 17

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    Wonderful poem and a great message. We may not like each other's taste in music, but what it does for our spirits is the same Kudos!

  • Ace - LightWithinMe silver member
    September 5

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    Hello.

    I do like the sentiments expressed in this poem, on many levels for I do make music myself. I would say though, that the repetition needn't have been so high, I mean no offence of course. I thought your rhythm and rhyme was done very well, didn't read forced at all, and it flowed very nicely, but then being a poet and a musician, that would be expected from you, ahhaha.

    My regards.


  • xtremely-confizzled
    August 23

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    i love this! i like poems about music, and this is one of the best i've seen! very very good.

    "Music is a passion of us all.
    Music is rhythm or rhyme.
    Music waits for a applause.
    Music is great even out doors.
    Music has a space in between"... those are my favorite descriptions of what music is. this was a lovely poem! nice write!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 7

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    Since we are both Piano Players, I can relate to this composition.--An enjoyable read!

  • marsu
    August 2
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    a good start,but too much excessive use of one word.

  • alive.
    July 26

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    Although everything you described about music is very true, it seems that there are so many more aspects of music that are left out. The poem doesn't seem complete, in a way.

  • hiraeth
    July 21

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    Well, you do describe various aspects of music, but I'm not sure why you've resorted to excessive use of repetition. It stifles everything else you've said, y'know?

    -hiraeth

  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    July 13
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    This is a great poem describing what music can do...

  • Lislaine
    July 2

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    Amaxing

    It´s so wonderful a poem about music... Music is mah life without music im not who i am coOol...


  • sOuL
    June 23

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    Very good poem about music
    yeah really the way you have started and went through till the end its amazing
    really enjoyed
    keep writing
    i am honored to be your friend


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 16

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    Ah, must love music as much as me! What kind is your favorite? I'm a jazz person, and this is a jazzy little piece you've written.

  • Venugopal silver member
    June 15
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    Great praise on music, so true. Opens eyes of wisdom
    Venu


  • Lotus-Mama silver member
    June 12

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    ahhh music...sometimes our only salvation. very nice write! Love the repition....esp ending with music is rhythm and rhyme....so simple....but so complex. beautiful!!!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 27

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    You have described music to a 't'. It is all of those things and more. It is a universal, indeed, cosmic language. I love this. This was wonderful. Good luck in the contest.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • libithina
    May 21

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    Music to my ears s Lib x x

  • toomysterious
    May 20

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    I like the sentiment, but for me this time the repetition seemed a bit overdone. I do love music and find it a great inspiration, too.
  • Bob Fox
    May 20
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    Music

    I love this piece for music is something I love. To me it was meant to create harmony and not misery, like some of todays so called musicdoes. thanks

  • RainbowGirl257
    May 2

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    i like how you have repeated music so many times. Some of the lines really made me think that music is a real person. thanks for entering and good luck.

  • Titus gold member
    April 26

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    A calm and collective sequined lined approval of lines that none compare when it comes to music, a feel that you may be quite good yourself with an instrument. Nice one!

  • Bob Fox
    April 26

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    Music

    Sweet music . Meant to bring harmony and not misery. Then rap happened and look at the world now. lol


  • nilav
    April 22

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    you have captured the healing power of music with your words...music can fill us with positive energy and has the power to bring us back to life...beautiful poem...

  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 14

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    Music is a wonderful and universal thing...it does all of this for us and so much more...music can inspire or change a mood in a moment...lovely work and take on music...
    Best!
    :


  • Somebody-New
    April 3

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    Music picks us up when we fall.

    i totally agree with this line, music has done that for me so many times! good write, best of luck in the contest!

  • ariosto gold member
    January 9
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    A very musical entry!
    thanks for entering!


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    January 8

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    Line five needs a slight alteration, it would be better if it said "an applause" rather than "a applause. apart from that it is a good write, maybe find other words for music? a very good penning, very descriptive and a good representation of what music is to many of us. It's another form of expression. Thank you very much for entering it into my contest and the very best of luck to you. xXx
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