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Black coffee syndrome

Picture a boy sitting on the floor of his room

Fully relaxed and deep in thought,far away from his doom  

His writing spirit intertwined with his determination to succeed

Reliving memory's of his past whilst processing a rhyme at lightening speed

Later on he will put pen to paper whilst his body is stimulated on caffeine

This is the creative state of mind of an Albino teen

His poetic ambition is the reason for this condition

With imagery in verse and stanza his life he explains

It is a scary thought to wonder what his mind contains

At school he saw him self as a soldier fighting a bullying war

His lyrical ways were his that he used to for his soul to mend

The pen paper and his mind where his closet friends

He has beaten of the gremlins of anxiety

In his mind and through his eyes likes to believe that he is a prodigy in a Urban society

His first rhyme was the deepest

He knows in his heart that the ladder to where he wants to go is the steepest

He is an ever maturing spiritual warrior for the less able

And something fresh like a white coated stallion bursting out of a corrupt stable

Through the words he writes as you read them in your ears you here the sighs

And if you feel and look across the page you can see and feel the moist drops of tears from his eyes.

To this poetic solider the war to become the next wonder of words has already begun.

He is battle hardened and ready the paper is his shield and the pen is his gun.

Doctors and Councilors call this condition the black coffee syndrome

The condition has effect on the mind and it give the people who posses it a strength that know man has ever known.

This is inner strength combined with inspiration at its rearrest form.

After this bonfire of inspiration he goes into his bed and back into a human beaning he does transform.

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  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    January 8, 2008
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    Such a good write, thank you so much for entering. The best of luck to you. xXx


  • blutearsofpain
    January 1, 2008
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    wow keep writing n thanks much for the comment