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a perfect girl (part 5)

she's everything i've imagined
everything i've longed for
she's everything i've dreamt about
and much, much more

in the midst of the dark
she shines like a light
through the worst storm
she shines just as bright

and when troubles appear
she brings tranquility
when the world crumbles
God is her stability

she is of more value
than a sea of diamonds
she is more beautiful
than what any poet pens

for this girl
i would wait ten thousand lifetimes
i would give her my heart
for without her i have no rhymes

i ask God daily
to grant me this request
to find the perfect girl i seek
and to be a man thats up to the test

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this is part 5 of a series.

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  • Climax
    August 16, 2008

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    A Rival.

    You have skills and that I can see...
    Looks like you might rival even me.

    This poem has power in every word...
    To the Finalist set this one might forward.


  • flamingspirit
    December 18, 2007
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    LOVE IT. a great addition to the series


  • going nowhere
    December 18, 2007

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    awwww.... kev... my! you have me speechless! i love this series... and i hope you keep adding to it.