shouts strongly feeling in chest
predict coldness; but still heat
leaves fall forming sweet bed
heart slams fearing the pain.
reverential, bodies, souls merge
in full dance of love, anguish
gentle eyes, in vain, hide
conviction of goodbye to end of day.
autumn will continue with memory
being a stoppage of reborn dreams
pictures moulding such a history.
perfection speaks of wanting size
able to risk the simple life
to give up verses, I compose.
Author notes
Prompt: http://www.jmaylone.com/gallery/2007/frenzy3
A contest entry
- QUICKIE TIME by doyouloveit.
475 points, ended December 31, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i want to highlight the whole poem it is amazing to me and full of feelings i can relate and understand and i am so glad you took the time to write from this picture
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Thanks for your appreciating wonderful comment.
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The imagery is superb as well as the creativity.
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