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The Vacant Pool

Death haunts the vacant pool
Silent and invisible, it waits in utter silence
Worn out by paitence,
It causes the water within to go violent

Thrashing in rage and bitterness
Yet unbelivably still
Until it's first victim
Begins to swim in free will

As soon as a body hits the water
Death pulls it down into the pools depth
He waits, with an evil smirk on his face
As the body runs out of breath

The water is cold as ice
For deaths heart is as cold as stone
The water set out a warning
So none wont know

You cannot escape
What you cannot see
So stay out of the water
Let Death be

Please dont use big words, i'm not as smart as i'd like to be.

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