Bleach my hair
and give me my sword.
So that i can start
rampage on man.
To become death
is my ultamite goal.
To reap the souls
of the condemned.
These souls are mine
for the taking today.
So come be with me
upon your death bed.
For I am a DeathGod
for all who see me.
I bring peace to all
the world in all hours.
Let me use my zunpokto
upon your demon body.
now you die you
viel creature.
Author notes
this was inspired by the anime show Bleach.if you haven't seen it yet you should it is a pretty good show.
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i agree, bleach is very good and this poem is great.
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awesome
I loved this poem!! It was really cool! Keep up the good work!
In Christ,
~Kayla~
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nice
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This is scary ~ at first I'm thinking one thing ~ then flip to oh boy ~ this is scary ~ it's almost like your in the mind ~ Nice job ~
Thanks so much for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you ~ -
Please read the contest rules again. Thank you.
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Cool
If this is an japanimation, you you certainly gave it some life. Great words to describe this deathGod character and the reaping of souls to boot. Very cool piece!!
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thanks i was watching bleach when i wrote this
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Very clever. A poem from Japanimation. I like I like! Keep up the good work.
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Really intense.... awesome!
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