the narcissist who
has done nothing important
writes shitty poems
see my notes
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deep truth
Indeed.
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lol cute
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hahahahaha.
i love this.
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SWEET!!!It wasn't the greatest poem or haiku ever written but it still made me laff.....
-Bella
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haha i <3 this!! im taking a haiku class on ap and the teacher continues to tell me i suck, very politely though!! i know how you feel
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ha ha :-)
loved it !
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lol. Wow... this was interesting. It made me laugh. Nice write.
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like me!
I like this haiku a lot. But then again, I'm a big fan of all things self-depricating. And this one really spoke to me.
I was kind of shocked when I saw you online because I remember you from the old days of allpoetry. I used to be kat cobain. And you're still on my favorites list from like 2002 or something.
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haha
awesome.
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lol
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not bad but mine are better
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I unfortunately have to say that I've read worse. I don't appreciate the haiku to the extent some people do perhaps. It's funny though... in a weird letting the mind wander sort of way.
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I love it!
Amazing~!
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OMG.... that's blasphemous!!! I'm sure of it....
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Nice
roflmao this is not even close to being a bad Haiku infact it just down right was weird but good work here though too. its an odd ball like Haiku and well that is not what matters most. never give up on yourself and don't beat yourself up thinking your powem here is the worse as I know I havesene alot worse. keep up the good work and co0ntinue to write and you;'ll eventually write excellent haikus and not worst like you feel this one is Signed, SmokinHotWhiteTiger
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hey, this is heaps better! Not the worst ever, not by a long way, and the aha moment has become huh? I like this very much
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really? i bet i could change your mind about this being the worst! lol
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