i never promised you a rose garden
i didnt reserve a spot for you in line
i didnt tell you i would wait forever
i never kept the door open for you
but i didnt need to.
i never had to promise you a rose garden
because you already had one sown for me
i didnt reserve a spot for you in line
because you never left my side
i didnt tell you i would wait forever
because you had already promised me
and i never kept the door open for you
because i had already given you the key
Please tell me what you think
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Awesome i liked the way you said "I didnt" so fucking awesomely shweet. ..<3.. Shelly
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does this mean there is someone special in cat's life? just kidding. it is a beautiful poem though. another winner!
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i love it. for reals.
the only thing i would edit if you feel so inclined to do so is the two lines that both ends in forever, the second line i would say something like "because you had already promised it to me"
don't know how you feel about that. i don't usually comment people like this, and i love the poem, but in my opinion and it's only my opinion that's the only thing stopping it from being incredible in my eyes.
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