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staged

I'm seeing the world through different eyes
did everyone change or just I?
no, its this deep cloud of change over my head
sending me into depression, though remaining unsaid
The ever-present guilt of what I've done
suffocates me like the smoke in my lungs
theres no high, high enough to escape the lows
no escape from this broken and narrow road
maybe I've just lost the ability to feel joy
or possibly its just the life i destroyed
the life that was mine
-now the stage is set, the script is divine
though the motivation is all lies
and the magic is gone
the curtain must rise
the show must go on.

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  • ms-cuddles silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    Nice Write

    This was pretty nice. We all do some things that are just not us every once in awhile. We pick ourselves up, learn and move on. Thanks for entering and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles