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An Evolution

An evolution
Is shown in one single life
From tadpole to frog.

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  • Stonecreek
    December 17, 2007

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    Using one word twice in a haiku tends to diminish it and be a waste of a word. Such is the case with life here. I feel you squandered an opportunity for an interesting last line. Instead of just saying the life of the frog, maybe say what made up his life.